Comments : Without you...

  • 18 years ago

    by LOVEmeNOT

    Dis is cute nd u r really showin ur emotionz...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    Hey!
    Your poem is very good. i loved it very much...5/5
    Take care
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I wish a strong prayer like this doesnt stay unheard and i also wish that until its heard....u do get the strength to stay up.

    beautifully written dear
    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Man thisis tearing u out i see but u put into words beautifully and with such spimplicity and spotaneuoisty.Great job!

    love,
    Wishy

  • 18 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Wow I can understand your pain.
    Nice pome.