by David Moss Jun 17, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
I am a tax collector, |
This song seems to have rated by someone who has no appreciation for fine folk lyrics… I enjoyed reading this piece and will give it a 5 |
by PygmyPuff
Its good, but I think you used the fact that it was a song, not a poem, as an excuse to make it fruity. I mean the writing. It just doesnt seem to have a flow like a good poem, it has rough patches. {4/5} |