by LovelyDivine Jun 17, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Everything was going so right, |
by Tara Kay
Beautifully written, it really touched my heart, i loved the flow and the rhymes. well done |
I can totally relate to this poem.. i dont know if the exact same thing is happening to both of us, but this sounds like something i would have just written.. beautifully written piece.. thanks for the comment :) |
by Jaime
Did you write this as a song? It just flowed like one, especially with the repetition. It's really sad, but a beautiful poem. |