Did you write this as a song? It just flowed like one, especially with the repetition. It's really sad, but a beautiful poem.

I can totally relate to this poem.. i dont know if the exact same thing is happening to both of us, but this sounds like something i would have just written.. beautifully written piece.. thanks for the comment :)
*rachel*

Beautifully written, it really touched my heart, i loved the flow and the rhymes. well done
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