Run

by PygmyPuff   Jun 17, 2006


Run,
Come on!
Come faster.
I need you now.
Don't leave me again.
You never left my heart.
This voyage, it never ends.
Together we shall always be.
Despite the current beneath our feet,
Pulling us down, deep into the water.
Trying to keep us away from ourselves.
So take my hand and run with me!
There is no need to stay here,
Just to be kept apart!
We can make it through
Insanity.
Together,
We can
Run

For a Style Contest...Its an Etheree. This consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. An etheree can
also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. I did a double where it goes up, then back down.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child

    I love writing poems in that style!
    very good by the way. i liked the woding of it, and how each line flows seamlessly into the next.

    thnks for the comment also. ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Totally awesome. I liked the triangle pointing to the right. The pace was exceptional. I never seen one before. thanks for sharing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dre4meR

    It does look very challenging...this is good...keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by David Moss

    I liked it - I have never heard of this style and looks like a very challenging way to present one. Cheers, and thx for comments on mine - DM

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