by Samantha Hollywood Jun 17, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
I got your back and you got mine |
by Biscuit
'when your cheeks are wet from drops of tears |
It flowed pretty well I liked it it was short so it didn't need much organization so its all good. |
by Nelle
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sooo sweet and very very heartfelt...I can relate to this ALOT! You are such a good friend..anyone would be lucky to have you in there life! This was great and full of emotions, the rhythm was great! 5/5 |
by not a poet
I wish all friendships were this picture perfect, love your work. |
This poem shows how much talent you have! It was really well written. It had great depth and was very powerful. I love how the first line and the last line have the same sort of meaning but are phrased differently. It makes the theme of the poem more clearly expressed and stronger to the reader. Great write-the flow was amazing! 5/5 |