"i remenise of all the years **"
'reminisce' not 'remenise'
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I thought the rhyming worked out very well, but instead of using the asterisks, I'd just make the poem into stanzas and format it a little better -- it makes it easier for the reader.

I can rele relate to tht poem...i like it

This poem shows how much talent you have! It was really well written. It had great depth and was very powerful. I love how the first line and the last line have the same sort of meaning but are phrased differently. It makes the theme of the poem more clearly expressed and stronger to the reader. Great write-the flow was amazing! 5/5

I wish all friendships were this picture perfect, love your work.
keep it up!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sooo sweet and very very heartfelt...I can relate to this ALOT! You are such a good friend..anyone would be lucky to have you in there life! This was great and full of emotions, the rhythm was great! 5/5

love ya =D
_-_Chanelle_-_

It flowed pretty well I liked it it was short so it didn't need much organization so its all good.
~~Retniapdoolb

'when your cheeks are wet from drops of tears
I reminise of all the years'

the best line! once again a poem filled with flawless rhyming :)

-biscuit-