by Sean Allen
First note: |
I love poems that reflect love and hope and this one does it for me |
by reem@l$
Its amazing to find people that realize their mistakes and apologize... I think that makes you unique...and the poem uhh i lo0o0oved it :D |
by Amanda
Ur poem it home....it was good |
by Krissey
Oh wow I really admire your courage of facing the situations you've been going through by simply just standing up! Apologies really can mean a lot and I hope it did to your friend! Loved this write keep it up! |
by Jen
WOW I like this poem a lot .... Your are very good at writing....i had a friend like that but i lost her she is to busy with her boyfriend to fit me in... oh well thanks for all of the comments they really really help and i appreciate them *THANKS* |
This poem is no doubt a 5/5! There is soo much emotion and the poem totally engulfed me and kept my full attention the whole way through. It is an amazing write! I love how you explained that even though you were hurting yourself physically it was hurting your friend emotionally--- The last line was my favorite. It really summed up the poem well. This is one of my favorite poems of yours! Great write and keep up the good work---- |
by Shawna
I enjoyed this poem. Some of the lines run a little long, and you may want to consider rewording them so it flows better. But overall it was a good poem!! |
by RetroRavey
That was lovely, very good. And ythank you very much for your comments on my work. |
Excellent job, and great message: |
by lexie
Great message.it was really sentimental which is always nice to see.wonderful work,5/5 |
"I promise this because these things I do.. |
Aw Sam, great work on this, i loved the whole thing. You're such an amasing friend to everyone, and you're such a talented writer. Great work. |
Cute poem...your friend should be proud. |
by Biscuit
Wow. u really are great at capturing the emotions in ur poems i have very much enjoyed reading them, i can recognise a lot of the feelings which u describe and i envy the talent u have at convertting them into wondeful poetry! |