Why?

Good poem!i agree with the above people tho!
nyways,
KEEP WRITING
cya
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Again you have some great ideas here, but the are kind of scrambled. It is hard for a reader to understand what you want to tell them. You loved and lost, so write it deeply. Tell me about your loss, and how much it hurt. Use your question formate if you want, but elaborate on your questions. "why did you say you loved me" Take that line for example. To make it powerful add a description of how the "you" said the loved you. Tell them what their voice was like, were you in their arms? Was it a whisper in the ear, or was a said quickly while they were blushing. Does that make sense? Bring your poems down to a personal level and write your soul into the words. again, just some suggestions.

-Tainted

Good job, great poem! I just have one suggestion, i think you have too much repitition. maybe instead af saying why after every sentance or phrase, maybe just after a whole "section"
for example:

You made me laugh,
you made me love,
you made me think
but why?

but good job!