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Hey!
I really like your poem i agree with "BLoomed Rose" its a perfect poem n a great start to writing poems! well umm keep writing
TAke care
xoxox

A good start to your poetry. In your profile you said you like music, and you seen to like to write, so I would say put the two together. Use your emotions to really bring your writing alive. Use imagery and vocabulary, and figurative language to give your poem a life of it's own. Make it so powerful that it makes the reading feel the emotions just like music does. Just some thoughts, but not your work is not crap, so don't call it that.

-Tainted

Aww, that is so sad! you can really feel the emotion though! great job, and no it's not crap. its letting how you feel into a poem, so I give you a 5/5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! perfect score