My Feelings for You

by Ike Dizzle   Jun 17, 2006


My Feeling for You

She is an angel with a flawless face
An angel with such beauty and grace
She is someone I will always protect
Continuing to making her life perfect

I will always get rid of your pains
I will always support your gains
Seeing you happy makes me whole
Watching you smile warms my soul

You are a person I will never forget
Ever since we first really met
I really need to ask
I want to end this task

You are just like a pearl
One of the precious items in the world
So as I get on one knee
I ask you will you go out with me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by mAy

    0n3 w0rD
    ;;t0uch!Ng*;
    =]

    w3LL...
    &&
    sw3eT!

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    A good piece, I liked it, though I dodn't have a favorite stanza, I'm afraid, it was all pretty equal, however, I think its probably one of the first two, because they were more powerful, flowing and had better rhymes.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by Laurie Tran

    Awws, that was short, but nonetheless, your emotions were strong.
    I honestly loved it, it's one of the sweetest poem's i've ever read.

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Awwwww, look at you.. Such a warm-hearted dude.. Dat girl should be happy to say yes

  • 17 years ago

    by STEPHANiiE

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