by BittersweetDecay Jun 17, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The night was reflecting on her satin dress |
by Jay jay
This poem is really really good! |
There were some of the rhyming problems but the imagery was vivid. And the flow was smooth though had some bumps in places. Really...well it was really cool what with it being slightly different yet the same. I mean the clan part a little unexpected. Loved the images. |
by *Goshikku*
I love the content and the format. looks good. Keep it up... |