Thats really well written, you've made the words flow from one to the other and join into something with so much emotion and feeling, and it shows such truth, about so many of us, looking like something, but underneath the visual we are another

well done girly and take care of yourself

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You started good but you kept breaking the rhythm.
It threw me off a little bit.
4/5
I still thought it was real good