Please Forgive Me

I like that. The ideas were a little bit repetitive, but it turned out nice :). The emotions in this poem were very strong.

"Btw do u mind(if i give credit of course) i put this in my info?" --That's what you left in a comment on my poem "Something Made You Different". I don't know exactly what you mean by your info, but as long as you make sure you say it was by me then I don't mind at all. I wrote it with a lot of personal messages within it, I'm glad somebody else can relate to it. ^_^

Awe thats sad but sweet! Your poem rhymes were a little cliche but still flowed nicly. The ending made it the cherry on top of the ice-cream and left me with the shock that one gets afte ready an excellent poem! It repeated alot of the same ideas tho throughout the poem just in different words! Remember even if you have to keep it short, make sure every line is uniquely used in the poem! A still overall nice job!! Keep writting!