"All her emotions hidden
All love is forbidden"

i really loved those two lines...they're perfect! i kind of feel like that, and i think that the poem as a whole flowed very well! keep it up :)

I really liked this poem there was so much hidden inbetween the lines.i loved it 5/5.

cory

This poem is cool as, good job
5/5

This was a great write. very pure and i can see it came from the heart. wonderful job! keep it up. 5/5.

-Ashlei.