Fake Smile

Good poem. Don't really know what else to say for as you can see I'm not the best commentor :P

I sympathise with u. been there done that. but it will work out. ur poem flows with a true meaning and heavy emotion. but its like u are holding bak.

This poem is good because it's so true. So many people have this fake happiness thing going you know. They don't want anyone to see how they really feel. Good writing
Tammy

Thats awsome cause its so true about alot of girls in this world

I think dat can b tru bout a lot of gurlz...but i like how u put it all together...5/5