I think dat can b tru bout a lot of gurlz...but i like how u put it all together...5/5

Thats awsome cause its so true about alot of girls in this world

This poem is good because it's so true. So many people have this fake happiness thing going you know. They don't want anyone to see how they really feel. Good writing
Tammy

I sympathise with u. been there done that. but it will work out. ur poem flows with a true meaning and heavy emotion. but its like u are holding bak.

Good poem. Don't really know what else to say for as you can see I'm not the best commentor :P