If I...

by Sunflower   Jun 18, 2006


If I died today
Would you care
Would your eyes tear
Would your heart flare

If I died today
Would you cry out screams
Would you weigh your thoughts
Would you live your dreams

Would it have made difference
If I held you close
If I told you I was sorry
If I didn't oppose

Would you of loved me more
If I made you smile
If I told the truth
If I made it worthwhile

If You died today
I would cry the ocean
I would flood the sea

If You died today
I would fade away
I would die within thee

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  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Truly, this is beautiful. You have explained your love, and questioned it. You have done a fantastic job. Well done. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Golden 101

    Simply excellent

  • 18 years ago

    by saurabh_poeticheart

    Nice one, felt so related to all the words. greatly done 2 keep it short and yet say it all. 5 of 5 frm me. hey check mine too

  • 18 years ago

    by Steffje

    I really like this poem!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    "Would you of loved me more"

    probably should be

    "Would you HAVE loved me more"

    Just a thought. Also, unnecessary capitalization of You in the second to last stanza but not in the last one?

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