"Would you of loved me more"

probably should be

"Would you HAVE loved me more"

Just a thought. Also, unnecessary capitalization of You in the second to last stanza but not in the last one?

I really like this poem!!!

Nice one, felt so related to all the words. greatly done 2 keep it short and yet say it all. 5 of 5 frm me. hey check mine too

Simply excellent

Truly, this is beautiful. You have explained your love, and questioned it. You have done a fantastic job. Well done. xx