Our Story

by Miss Pipp   Jun 18, 2006


I met you, I felt something
I flirted with you
You flattered me, you smiled so I let you in
We were sweet together, we were close.

People could see what we could feel
When we were together,
Nothing could tear us apart

At first I thought it was nothing, just a friendship.
But we grew closer every time I saw you
You would hug me, smile and make me feel wanted.

I couldn't accept your compliments
I couldn't accept your words
I thought you were just being nice
You were to every other girl
Why should it mean anything different to me?

You got a girlfriend
I thought I wouldn't ever be like her, and now you were with her, I would be nothing
But when I was around you acted like I was the only girl in your world

I saw you with her and I could see
She didn't really mean it
I wanted to tell you
She was going to hurt you

When you did break up
You were fine and looking for a new girl
You had one in mind.
You asked her and she said she would think.

We were together that day and
Closer than we'd ever been
All the people around us were saying
"Go out! Go out! You like each other"
We shrugged it off for a while
but then we both started to think
but then someone saved us by telling them about the other girl
even though we stayed close.

She saw us together, that's when she made up her mind
The next day we were together
And it was the day we finally listened
To the people around us.
You wanted to know if we should go out
Of course I wanted to but I didn't tell you straight away
I never gave you a straight answer
Although you figured it out.

As we were walking
We got asked again
You said we were
This surprised me but I liked it.
Even thought I knew we were I liked to hear you say it.

The first few days with you were stressful
Because of people prying into our lives
But it was good to be in your arms.

When you were around
I couldn't have been happier
Until
You started asking me if I would pash you,
I wasn't ready for that.
You kept on bugging me
Telling people I was frigid.

You made me even more stressed
Thinking you would dump me
I didn't know if you really meant it
So I didn't know how much I would matter as
Just another ex.
I knew there were other girls after you
But I kept on holding you tight
Thinking I would never let you go.

~this is unfinished and has no title as yet. I don't know what to call it, Some suggestions.. Please?~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Oh, yea.. forgot the title :P um.. sean's suggestions look good!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    This, i felt was kind of like a story.. more than a poem.. the idea and emotions were still clear though.. maybe work on the flow, and try and make it into more a poem.. 3/5 p.s. thank you for volunteering to be in my club! :D i really appreciate it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    I had no idea what pash meant.. apparently it is australian for french kissing... boy, I had to look that one up.

    You could call it something simple, like
    "Our Poem"
    or
    "Our Story"
    or
    "How We Came to Be"
    or
    "The Two of Us"

    meh, whatever you'd like. I personally like simple titles for love poems.