by Sean Allen
I had no idea what pash meant.. apparently it is australian for french kissing... boy, I had to look that one up. |
by Jessica
This, i felt was kind of like a story.. more than a poem.. the idea and emotions were still clear though.. maybe work on the flow, and try and make it into more a poem.. 3/5 p.s. thank you for volunteering to be in my club! :D i really appreciate it! |
by Jessica
Oh, yea.. forgot the title :P um.. sean's suggestions look good! |