by Drugs && Hugs Jun 18, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I'm tired and I'm cold |
by AnCi
Amazing! This is a big improvement from you suicide poem. The structure of the poem is great and the ryhmes are excellent. Keep writing! 5/5 |
by StandStill
The first stanza and last were definitely better than the middle two. Definitely liked them a lot more. |