Wow. powerful ending love it

This is a gud piece even though u sound a bit weird.lol.diction is gud.your imagery is worth it and ur rhymes cnt be predicted wich i very gud.keep writing dear u gud

But when you die... when you are buried in the ground... you realize, there is no change. Change is one of the most important things; you can see new things everyday. In Death, there is no Change. In Life, Change visits almost all the time.

I have tried it last month stayed in hospital for few weeks. I had to drop all my courses and am back in much worth situation. It does not work for me no more. It is like a temptation of an easy way out. But I know whenever I choose the easiest way I loose big time. I do not let my laziness get the best of me no more, no matter how difficult it may get. I like the language of this piece.

I've been there. Not underground but on its doorstep. When you're in that place, its like you are standing in front of a brick wall. You are too close to the problem. You are bruised and bleeding from trying to break through it, exhausted from trying to climb it, and not in the right state of mind to figure out a way around. I needed a helping hand of sorts, a friend to show me a way around the wall. Sure it was a longer trip, and there was pain along the way... but there was also laughter, smiles, and love. You ever need someone to vent to I'm all ears. No judgement, and no advice unless you ask for it.

There is always a reason for us to live
It's too easy to give up and die.
Lost love, friends or family
"Yet you are still alive"

The pain you feel inside consumes,
But remember everything you love.
Your time is not yet over,
Your seat is not reserved above.

So please continue breathing
And let your fire burn
I know that I would miss your words
In this I'm not alone

Craig

A vibrant emotional piece beautifully written that echoes a question asked by .any at some time or an on other. You have an eloquent way with words

This is beautifully twisted. Love it. Its raw, and its the truth as you see it.

Personally, I love change, new faces, places, partners... the more the merrier in more ways than one.
~Alec

wow!
i mean , I've always wanted to write something like this but couldn't get hold of the right words. You just nailed it :)

I think everyone is bound to go down this dark path at least once in their life. You have depicted these dark thoughts in a way that most people could connect with, myself included. Hopefully you dont feel these things anymore, that you've overcome these dark thoughts. I find that writing them down helps.

I can so relate
Keep writing
All the very best.