Wow this is great! this is erica- thank you so much for the encouragement! and for commenting on my poem! you are very talented and if you ever need a prayer just let me know! thanx again- keep writing! -erica

Very very good!
i loved reading it
good job an keep it up

Wow, this is strong. i like ti. great rhyme flow. its really good. i couldnt take my eyes off it

I loved the way this was written, it was addictive to read i just had to finnish it. great write