An Angel's Song (Going Under)

by Wings Of Flames   Jun 18, 2006


Droplets of the ice,
That beckoned for my soul,
Creeping hands pulling me,
A tide in life my goal,

In and out of sadness,
With a distant hiss of grief,
For now I'm screaming save me,
Without a white relief,

Tingling of the sand,
As it stabs the swollen cut,
Evolving into madness,
My last. My final rut,

My left hand held possession,
All left of my conceit,
Dolls with tattered dresses,
Silent in defeat,

The right lasts not forever,
But still cupped between my skin,
Thorns stuck under my fingers,
Love of paper thin,

But I do not keep,
The cherished of my desire,
Never seen in light,
Thus the heart's enchanting fire,

Thunders through the clouds,
I stare out onto sea,
I wander to the darkness,
Alone with only me,

My thoughts plunge in much deeper,
The current pulled so strong,
Awoken to my fears,
Of a lifeless angel's song.

**It was for a contest...that's the reason for the song name titley thing..encase you were wondering**

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  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Wow. i really love the way you right. its so good. i mean wow. lol. this poem was really good. i like the title a lot. and the poem itself was fantastic. but uhm you spelt one thing wrong.. "encase" its incase. but great job sweetie.

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I hope you won that contest. You're a very talented writer. And this poem, helped to portray that talent you possess.

    "Dolls with tattered dresses,
    Silent in defeat,"

    Fcuking loved these 2 lines, they were amazing. Such a vivid image! 5/5 =]

    -Jenna.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Ooo very interesting i like it, my type of a read keep it up hon xox sam

  • 18 years ago

    by not a poet

    You have a very beautiful style of writting! i really like it!
    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Hey gr8 poem! love the details. its amazing. gr8 wrk 5/5