The Ending

by ~[Pisang]~[Chives]~   Jun 18, 2006


Explosions in our hearts
My last heart beat
The last words
Said through these lips
Extinction in this world
Never knowing
What can happen
The last goodbye
While lips are cold and dark
When the final kiss comes
From two lovers
Who were truely in love

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  • 18 years ago

    by Swe3t 16

    I think the poem was deep and well thought out, but maybe if you tried to think about some of the ideas abit more then it would make more sence then it would atomatically be more deeper..
    But apart from that it was pretty good
    =) keep up the good work
    swe3t xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole

    Wow such depth and sadness in this one. u can write in any form and style and u still write beautiful things well done keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Very nice!!!

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