The voice...

by master of shadow   Jun 18, 2006


Telling me I'm worthless
And that no-one does care
Say I deserve everything,
That life is more than fair.

Convince me to do things,
That scare me deep within
Telling me that in the game of life,
There is no chance I could win.

"you'd be better off dead",
"they all hate you deep inside"
"they think you are worthless,
And wish that you had died"

Try to ignore them
Make them go away,
But it is a futile trial
For they are here to stay.

But the more I ignore them
The stronger they become.
Until I can feel nothing
Inside become so numb.

Live fighting against them
Trying not to let them win.
The war forever rages
The battles deep within.

Try to fight them eternally
Not let them take control,
For they would kill me otherwise
I know this is their goal.

But at times it gets too hard
And I then no longer care,
Allow them to take over
And kill me if they dare.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Wow.....absolutely amazing poem-all the poems you write are----5/5 great flow, rhythym, and very powerful

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    But the more I ignore them
    The stronger they become.
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    I loved those lines. This was a really good emotional dark poem! And, It's pretty true aswell. You did a really good job on it! Keep it up! 5/5

    ``Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by oldthings

    "and kill me if they dare" i like this last line. it's like the last stand of defiance in someone who has otherewise given up daring them to try and take him. I unno, my view =P good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    Nice job.

    -jessika

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I love the flow of this dark poems that clearly reflects feelings that I have felt

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