I love the flow of this dark poems that clearly reflects feelings that I have felt

Nice job.

-jessika

"and kill me if they dare" i like this last line. it's like the last stand of defiance in someone who has otherewise given up daring them to try and take him. I unno, my view =P good poem

But the more I ignore them
The stronger they become.
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I loved those lines. This was a really good emotional dark poem! And, It's pretty true aswell. You did a really good job on it! Keep it up! 5/5

``Taleee. xx.

Wow.....absolutely amazing poem-all the poems you write are----5/5 great flow, rhythym, and very powerful