Amazing Poem! I'm speechless, great use of words!

Wow, the words were well put together so it got the true emotion out as you read it. amazing poem, 5/5 for sure

You are incredibly talented. I really love your work

This was a great poem. Flow and rhyming were great. And I LOVED your choice of wording. Very nice indeed. Keep up the great work! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Awesome poem, one of the best writes i've came across in awhile

The entire time I read this poem I felt very uncomfortable because I felt there was some sort of extremely symbolic meaning that I was missing, something that could be cleverly summed up in a word, like "christmas" or something. It was/is disturbing.

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The cameras are jarred and barred with jumbles
Of mumbles and knaves with stained swords"
that was my favorite couplet, due to the continuation of jumbles with mumbles, I thought that was very well done.

A deep poem that seemed to go with it's on beat, and as Sean said probably could be summed up with a simple word. I did like the imagery it had though especially:
"Of mumbles and knaves with stained swords"
Clever word choice and an incredbly talented poet.

I was impressed by the flow of this poem, it really was well written. The words rolled right into eachother easing the separation between stanzas. I really enjoyed this poem. A brilliant write.

-Tainted

I thought this was pretty good! I don't know what a Mourners is so it did not make a that much since to me1 But I do thinkthe flow was great and the words all went well!

First off, Loved the use of words. Second, your imigary was uncanning. The whole poem gave me chills [in a good way]. You have real talent.

Oh wow.. I really like this of yours. It was powerful and strong and just down right well written. Grea job!

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

ANOTHER PERFECT POEM BY A GREAT POET, KEEP IT UP 5/5