Rip apart my soul

by Polly   Jun 18, 2006


Stab me in the heart,
push me on the floor,
cut me into pieces,
torment me even more.

Turn your back again,
stand and watch me cry,
shrug and walk away,
leave me alone to die.

Once again you're begging,
you're telling me you're sorry,
but this time I wont say,
"I forgive you now don't worry."

I won't let you in,
to rip apart my soul,
it's time I take over my life,
and regain my lost control.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. this was so sad.. i loved it.. it really appealed to me, and was slightly refreshing.. finally a poem about real feeligns.. nice job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Yet again amazing work. Your wording and detail was great, I really love your poems. I can't help but repeat myself but it's so true.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Loved the last stanza. It was really good. The poem itself was good though. It all flowed nicely with a good rhyme scheme. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    I really like it. I especially like the last stanza. I've definitely felt that way before. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Erica

    Beautiful polly. reminds me of someone i know...i love the last part. its a perfect way to end the poem. keep it up
    =) cherry

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