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by Lovely Bones
Wow that poem packs a punch! I can truly relate to this so much.. it's horrible. There's no worse feeling than the feeling of being used. All I have to say for this poem is to be careful of the words you use, such as: "Then were not at school, Your kind hearted and funny 'were' should be we're 'Your" should be you're I've noticed it in some other places as well, and it makes a big difference lol.. But this was a very good poem. Keep it up!