Comments : Different Person

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Wow that poem packs a punch! I can truly relate to this so much.. it's horrible. There's no worse feeling than the feeling of being used.

    All I have to say for this poem is to be careful of the words you use, such as:

    "Then were not at school,
    Your kind hearted and funny

    'were' should be we're
    'Your" should be you're
    I've noticed it in some other places as well, and it makes a big difference lol..

    But this was a very good poem. Keep it up!