Comments : Always There

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Very good poem. simple but very seewt:)

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Greatt poem, just a few spelling errors i picked up,
    *khere* there
    So even though I can't see him
    *knoew* Know he's here
    And also because.

    Then this line
    So even though I can't see him
    I think you must change it to He's see me
    And i know he's there, because you said near the beginning that you don't know what he looks like and the line is just too similar, just a thought!

    Mwah