Greatt poem, just a few spelling errors i picked up,
*khere* there
So even though I can't see him
*knoew* Know he's here
And also because.
Then this line
So even though I can't see him
I think you must change it to He's see me
And i know he's there, because you said near the beginning that you don't know what he looks like and the line is just too similar, just a thought!