by Michael D Nalley Jun 18, 2006
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Lord please forgive our transgression |
by LadyPearl
Beautifully written, very understandable poem |
by Jessica
That was good.. the rhymes worked and the flow was good.. you used nice language and i really got the feel of what you were trying to say! nice write! 5/5 |
by Always4You
Wow that was really good!! I love it when christians put their beliefs into writing..Great job:) |
by Joy
I really liked the rhyming, I wish I could rhyme that well!! |
by Trish
I love this poem, it really brings out how things should be in us that God wants. Thats almost like a prayer that everyone should say to God to ask for his help in following his ways. |