This flows fantastically with some very well put content. It is clearly conveyed and easy to read, yet still maintains an element of depth.

That is so incredible, the way all the words flow together is perfect and seamless and it's beautiful to read and even better when thought is put into the meaning, Excellent job.

The flow is wonderfully, and the meaning is even better, this poem makes me think about it, the meaning behind the poem is greater and deeper than any words.

I love this poem, it really brings out how things should be in us that God wants. Thats almost like a prayer that everyone should say to God to ask for his help in following his ways.

I really liked the rhyming, I wish I could rhyme that well!!

Loved it, good job!!

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Wow that was really good!! I love it when christians put their beliefs into writing..Great job:)

That was good.. the rhymes worked and the flow was good.. you used nice language and i really got the feel of what you were trying to say! nice write! 5/5

Beautifully written, very understandable poem