Dedicated

by Aypee   Jun 18, 2006


May your travels take you many places,
may you do great things,
know great embraces.
May you find a love so true-
so true.
And remember me for not having you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Wow.. i adore this.. it was such a sweet dedication and yet so full of sorrow and longing... i absolutely loved it.. it was reli short, but u got ur message across and u did it effectively..

    ur last line reli stood out.. i loved it.. i also lyked ur rhythm.. it wasnt reli that obvious, and im not sure if u meant it, but it produced a gr8 effect

    i dont noe how anyone cud vote this a 3, and not even explain.. and no1 commented either..

    im glad i came across this (maybe im in one of my moods :P)

    keep it up
    take care
    NannO

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