Wow.. i adore this.. it was such a sweet dedication and yet so full of sorrow and longing... i absolutely loved it.. it was reli short, but u got ur message across and u did it effectively..

ur last line reli stood out.. i loved it.. i also lyked ur rhythm.. it wasnt reli that obvious, and im not sure if u meant it, but it produced a gr8 effect

i dont noe how anyone cud vote this a 3, and not even explain.. and no1 commented either..

im glad i came across this (maybe im in one of my moods :P)

keep it up
take care
NannO