by RetroRavey Jun 18, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
There's a cold hand on my shoulder, |
by Ariana
Apart from the break in rhyme in your third stanza i thought this all flowed well. i really like the words you use because they were different. I also liked the imagery you create because i found it easy to visualise what you are writing about. Nice work :) :) |
by Mousie
That was really good! In some parts i got confused, but i just reread them and got them... haha i tend to do that sometimes, i get distracted and i'm like "huh!?!?" but yeah... so thanks for all those comments... keep checking for some new stuff and i'll check out yours too! |
Wow. excellent work yet again. u have a git that is for sure. |
by Poetess Lana
Her fave Evanescence song is Whisper... great poem dearie!!! 5/5 and its spelled allanah... |
Hi :) Taking Over Me actually was for Alannah's (sp) contest. My fave Evanescence song is Imaginary. Is urs "Taking Over Me"? |