Hi :) Taking Over Me actually was for Alannah's (sp) contest. My fave Evanescence song is Imaginary. Is urs "Taking Over Me"?

this poem is haunting my head lol... very powerful!

Her fave Evanescence song is Whisper... great poem dearie!!! 5/5 and its spelled allanah...

Wow. excellent work yet again. u have a git that is for sure.

That was really good! In some parts i got confused, but i just reread them and got them... haha i tend to do that sometimes, i get distracted and i'm like "huh!?!?" but yeah... so thanks for all those comments... keep checking for some new stuff and i'll check out yours too!

Apart from the break in rhyme in your third stanza i thought this all flowed well. i really like the words you use because they were different. I also liked the imagery you create because i found it easy to visualise what you are writing about. Nice work :) :)