So much talent shines through in this piece it
has so much emotion and depth and the ending is just breath tacking.

Its terrible having to imagine the person you used to love or even still love lying in the arms of another person. The repititions of my baby my love were very well used. Since it doesn't take much effort change the U to you.. just because its pointless not to haha. i liked this poem. 5/5 good job

Well then, that lieing cheating bastard should be burning in hell too! lol Usually in poems, repetition can be absolutely horrific but somehow you seemed to captivate me with the whole poem...You did a great job and I hope that the lesson learned from this is something like, "Never trust someone who promises something he can not guarantee" -Me 5/5 Best wishes!

That was deep, and really captivating..It was sad, yet, had a great story behind it. The flow was just flawless through out the whole and I loved how you used, My Baby, My Love in every other stanza but changed the last part and how the 3 line was always the same until the end. The ending was just beautifully penned....Great Job...

5/5

Loved it, and again, I can relate. 5/5

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Lizzi

It was a beautifully written piece. it was very powerful and had a lot of emotions behind it. it was a lovely poem to read. nice work 5/5

I love the use of rhetorical questions it helps the reading question and reflect on your message. However i suggest writing the word you instead of 'U" in the third line of the third stanza. The low modality worked well with this poem. I also loved the effect the captitals had on the repetitive words; My Baby, My Love. The last line i think makes the poem; a slightly uncanny twist. well done

I LOVED IT! OMG it was great you have great talent.
By the way thanks for commenting on mine.

Before anything else, I'd like to express my sincerest gratitude for appreciating my art.

This one really speaks of "reality" and you have written it in undeniable truth. I believe I can relate with the thought of the poem.
I like all the lines!!!!