by Lil miss Robin Elizabeth Jun 19, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Don't pull me into you magical eyes, |
I like it!!!!!~ericamayb- |
by donk2ymouth
This is a funny poem? Lol, anyways I like the poem I don't think it's funny, I think it should go into the 'life society' catergory under "inspirational poems' because everything that you mentioned in this poem is inspirational and true, not something that should be laughed at. And I agree with Jaime, in the second stanza you did a great job naming most of the things that are in common fairytale stories, the format and flow of this poem are great, some rhymes are corny, but some are really good, but hey you can't have them all. Anyways that was a long run-on sentence..Nice job. |
by HEATHER
Good |
by Jaime
Great job especially with the second stanza, you indirectly mentionned most of the common fairytales. A good message behind it too, us girls really don't need a Prince Charming to be happy! This is a topic I love to write about too, I loved this. |
by Megan
Hey this is an AWESOME poem...Keep it Up!!!! thanx for commenting on my page :) |