Beautiful Disaster

by PygmyPuff   Jun 19, 2006


Beginning with the condom rip,
Ending with a birth.
Any chance of a good life destroyed.
Until you came into her life,
Taking away the pain.
Insuring happiness forever.
Forgiving the guilt built up inside.
Unlatching her inner spirits,
Letting her finally be free.

Days passed with no harm,
Inside she felt worth the pain.
Silenced at her home,
Allowed to be free with her love.
Shaken off by the unloving ones.
Time pressured her existence,
Everything she had never meant to be.
Regret thrown away for good.

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  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I mean "My Bloody Editor".

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Thanks for your excellent critique of my poems. It was much appreciated. This is a very good poem in my opinion. Wow, I liked the way you continued the poem through excellent bridging. You have great talent and it shows. If you get a chance read my poem "Bloody Editor". I would love your opinion on it.

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Thanks for your excellent critique of my poems. It was much appreciated. This is a very good poem in my opinion. Wow, I liked the way you continued the poem through excellent bridging. You have great talent and it shows. If you get a chance read my poem "Bloody Editor". I would love your opinion on it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannes

    Nice tho sometimes I have the feeling it doesn't fit right ;-)4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥ღ alwayz... forgotten ღ♥

    Awww this is a really gorgeous poem well done....

    [xXx]...leah...[oOo]

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