Awww this is a really gorgeous poem well done....

[xXx]...leah...[oOo]

Nice tho sometimes I have the feeling it doesn't fit right ;-)4/5

Thanks for your excellent critique of my poems. It was much appreciated. This is a very good poem in my opinion. Wow, I liked the way you continued the poem through excellent bridging. You have great talent and it shows. If you get a chance read my poem "Bloody Editor". I would love your opinion on it.

Thanks for your excellent critique of my poems. It was much appreciated. This is a very good poem in my opinion. Wow, I liked the way you continued the poem through excellent bridging. You have great talent and it shows. If you get a chance read my poem "Bloody Editor". I would love your opinion on it.

I mean "My Bloody Editor".