This is good...i can sense the anger...yet it can be a lot better if there was a pattern...for example..."so i say whatever" in the second stanza it was first...then third it was second...and none in first...overall there was emotional meaning

The repitition was pretty good, but if the poem was any longer I think I'd get sick of the word 'whatever'. The rhyming was very natural.

Nice poem-easy to read. You definately have talent so keep writing!

I thought it was good. The rhyming was good, and it was easy to read. Good job.

The repetition was alright but I think if you explained more about why you say this or what happened it could have been a bit better. RHymes were okay though

Aww.. this was quite sad..but i didn't feel that your emotion was really expressed very well.. you should really go in deep to how you really feel..not just say what you would tell your friends.. nice try though, 4/5