Very interesting poem. Nicely written.

No matter how many times I read it, I can't get my head around it. I do like poems like this. And long strange titles, like "pots, pans and the universe."

As Sourav said, this is indeed, an interesting poem.

Interesting and different. I loved the colour imagery as that gave the whole thing a lovely 'tinge' lol.
I guess you could interpret it in many ways and the vague vocab certainly helps.
Sterling effort.

Now this is really beautiful. I could fine no error's besides the lack of some punctuation. But other then that this is one of the best pieces that I have read from you. You have a wonderful use of imagery and your skill with structure is brilliant. This poem held a lot of different meaning in it and I loved the message that it conveyed.

Keep up the wonderful work hun! 5/5

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Letty

Well-done...and interesting, too....

Great poem kind of interesting and different from most poems i have read, but still go0d joB 5/5 =]