The Scarred Star

by Rain   Jun 19, 2006


As I gase apon a wishing star
I see its glorious blaze,
but still I think of all the others
That have ceased to amaze.
Yet this one star which I saw first
Is the star I wish, tonight,
Would take the bad out of my day
And make it all turn right.
Still....this one thing remains
Of the nightmare left behind:
The scar imprinted on my soul
That can never be refined.
~Wishing stars might make it better
And make it seem okay...
But still you rot deep inside
And let your heart decay.~

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  • 18 years ago

    by awww

    Nice poem... i like it... keep writing!

    ~angel~

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I loved this one. I love the imagery and the vocab was lovely. It flowed well and had a great ending
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Driver

    Really good job. it flowed nicely and you put forth emotions, well written.
    Driver

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I did actually enjoy this poem, at first i wasnt sure if i would like it, but once i had read it twice, i realised it is very very good, and i really did like it. It flowed well, was sad but had some meaningful output, well done
    xxxxx
    love Tara-Kay

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Wow...I really liked this...It's not the normal topic you hear of being written about and I lovet he ending. 5.5

    xDarkSuicidex

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