by Kristina Jun 19, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Why am I still so sad, |
by AnnMarie
This was okay! I think that you should have gone on a little with some more details....such as what does it feel like to be keeping this secret from your loved one? Does it make your heart want to bust your head....... is it tearing you a part every time you look at him??? Do you get what I mean? Alright over all it was a pretty good poem! |