My Worst Mistake Ever

by .mommy_3   Jun 19, 2006


My worst mistake ever,
was letting go of u.
it hurt me so much,
when i said we're thru.

my worst mistake ever,
was believing wat u say.
y did i keep on
loving u this way?

my worst mistake ever,
was saying i love u.
y would i say such a thing,
when i hardly even know u?

my worst mistake ever
was ever meeting u.
another mistake was
saying, i want u.

if i would have never said
i love u forever.
i would have never made
that worst mistake ever.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    You have a good thing going here, I just have two suggestions:

    1. Write out the full words for "you" and "why", people will generally take your poem more seriously.

    2. If you are writing a poem that you intend to have rhyme, as I assume you did with this one, try not to rhyme a word with itself. For example "you" with "you", which you did twice.

    Other than those two things, I thought your poem was fairly nice, strong emotions, and you got your point across clearly. Good job.

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