by Kristina Jun 19, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Yeah I love you, |
by Sean Allen
I think that the first half of the poem is so standard that it should be revamped. Details are really what make love poems great, because they can both connect on a personal level but still remain unique to the poet. You need more details, descriptions, and poetic devices to make this poem really special. |