by Megan Jun 19, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
Baby,why\'s it gotta be this way? |
by Whittney
Hey good poem! u've got a lot to say and u express it very well! thanks so much for commenting on mine too. keep it up!~whittney |
It was pretty good, it had emotion but to be constructive critic, it lacked a little bit of...i don't know how to say it...sense? the lines were short and long so that was a lil weird, but it was still good! 5/5 |