Comments : Lesbian on a mission! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~almost ur cinderella~*~

    WOW!!!...dat was a great one i love it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Edna Sweetlove

    I think that a little bit more attention to grammar and spelling would improve things and make your story more readable. Erotica need not be carelessly written and good grammar can be sexy too.

  • 18 years ago

    by ToxicChick

    Wow!even tho im not a lesbian, im confortable readin stories like this, and seriously..i havent been this turned on for quite some time lol!
    loved this poem!
    it rocked!
    keep them cumming...
    love fern x

  • 18 years ago

    by Nate

    Wow! When does the movie come out?
    Nate aka "The Tie Guy"

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    That was so hot lol...I'm not lesbian but that was good. I mean...wow! lol
    5/5 for sure

    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by kida

    This is allright i aint less but its a good story

  • 18 years ago

    by kida

    Like wow!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Dude that is so fuking hot that turned me on lol...

  • 18 years ago

    by χ-я.ι.α-χ

    Great poem. im not les, but great discription and great poem. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Manda

    Omg your poem turned me on. wow, it was so hot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Wooww when i started reading it at first i had to continue it,,, it really turned me on OMG!!! its great 5/5 woooow its a very good one i loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~Victoria~*~

    Turned on isnt even the word for wat i feet wjile i read this poem.it made me wanna fuk omg...that was so hiot i wish i was there wow that is sexy!!!

    -victoria.aka._lez-babii

  • 18 years ago

    by xSecrets and Lies are Minex

    That was awsome!! turned me on!!! keep the amazing poems coming!

  • 18 years ago

    by rubberduckii

    Well babe im glad you had fun, or should i say im glad youre having fun? lol anyways i liked it, good stuff

    heather

  • 18 years ago

    by jodie

    Fcuk me that was mint i wish i was experiancing that. it made me horny as fcuk im really wet now great poem do somemore lol love yewww xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Shar

    WOW!! That was awesome!! Im all wet!!! Damn its been waaay too long since Ive been with a woman!!! lol HUGS!!! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by veronica80s

    Very Sexxxy.. love it!!.. keep u the good work..

  • 16 years ago

    by DesiredLove

    Like everyone else said...
    WOW
    That was amaziinq
    =]
    Keep iit up

  • 15 years ago

    by ToRn iiN2 PeIcEs

    Wow.what an amazing expirience lolz
    good job.
    made it come to life.

  • 15 years ago

    by darknessfalling

    Like someone above me said turned on doesnt even begin to cover it